I liked it, just not as much as the original.
The original really emphasized the melody, as opposed to your emphasis on the bass. Not that it's bad, i just like the original better.
I also thought the leads were quite weak. They felt very behind, like there was too much equalizer on it. Generally I think you put too much emphasis on the lows, or at least it sounds that way.
Obviously I'm not very good at producing, (check my music, it sucks) but I still have a good ear.
So basically, I think you should just emphasize the leads more by making them louder, or putting less equalizer on the highs, etc.